After a long time not looking back at what I’ve written, I spent the past few days re-reading chapter 4 and the beginning of chapter 5. The result is that I was terribly dissatisfied with what had been written, so some parts have been redone from scratch, and you can find them in today’s snapshot. No real advancement on the story, but the changes were really needed. Notice that the last part of chapter 5 has not been finalized yet and that will surely be subject to huge changes the moment I work on it.
Should you be wanting to read, .
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