After a long time not looking back at what I’ve written, I spent the past few days re-reading chapter 4 and the beginning of chapter 5. The result is that I was terribly dissatisfied with what had been written, so some parts have been redone from scratch, and you can find them in today’s snapshot. [...]
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It took way longer than I had predicted, but chapter 4 and therefore Part One of The Path to the Light are finally completed! Getting this out of the door was extremely hard, mostly due to lack of time and also of motivation (sometimes these things happen). Right now I haven’t reviewed Chapter 4 throroughly, but [...] Despite a load of work related duties and a terrible toothache, I managed to get a new snapshot out of the door. There are a few adjustments, correction of typing mistakes, and most importantly, new content (and a new drawing). Unless I decide that the current text is bad and needs to be rewritten, I’ll [...] After two weeks of silence, I finally pushed a new snapshot up today. It’s mostly continuing chapter 4, of which I am halfway. There are Easter holidays soon so I may be able to write more than what my current schedule allows me to. Grab the snapshot at the novel page. Bookmark It Hide Sites $$(‘div.d223′).each( function(e) { e.visualEffect(‘slide_up’,{duration:0.5}) [...] Aside secret projects, work has progressed also on The Path to the Light. Specifically, today’s snapshot includes a massive rewrite of parts of chapter 3 (in my personal view, the past version was terrible), and also progresses the story further in chapter 4. Grab the updated snapshot on the novel page. Feedback appreciated Bookmark It Hide Sites $$(‘div.d222′).each( function(e) [...] |
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