By Einar, on February 25th, 2008
Aside secret projects, work has progressed also on The Path to the Light. Specifically, today’s snapshot includes a massive rewrite of parts of chapter 3 (in my personal view, the past version was terrible), and also progresses the story further in chapter 4.
Grab the updated snapshot on the novel page. Feedback appreciated
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By Einar, on February 19th, 2008
I’ve just uploaded a new snapshot for The Path to the Light. It doesn’t add up much but fixes some embarassing errors (three is not four) and adds a few pages of more content.
I’m frankly not very impressed with my results lately, so I will try to go over the text and change accordingly during [...]
By Einar, on February 7th, 2008
I have completed chapter 3, finally, and included this in the latest snapshot I put up just now. Aside the actual completion (and new art inside) there are a long series of changes due to my dissatisfaction in the way things were written. While I will now progress on chapter 4, chances are that I’ll [...]
By Einar, on January 27th, 2008
I have written yet another snapshot which I pushed just now on the snapshot. There’s not much new content (though the insight in Dario’s past continues), but a large part of the action scene has been rewritten for better vocabulary use.
I’m quite confident in the fact that I can finish chapter 3 by next week, [...]
By Einar, on January 20th, 2008
Finally, I was able (sorry but I had a rather large commitment before) to write and add a new snapshot today. Currently it covers more than half of chapter 3, so I expect to finish it by next week, hopefully. Another change in the snapshot is that two cleaned-up versions of the drawings are included [...]
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